My favorite of his hilariously titled annoyances was Am I in the right movie? I say "favorite" not because I like this mistake but because, in all of the peer reviews I have had to do in college, it is the most bothersome to me. Am I in the right movie? is the analogy Stedman uses to explain the feeling one gets when the quotation in a paper is not grammatically analogous to the preceding lead in. A lot of these seem like tense and subject-verb agreement patterns. His suggestion is practical: read your work aloud. If it doesn't make sense, change it. This seems like it should be logical advice for the entirety of most essays, but people don't usually have the time to go in and proofread. (or take the time, I guess, for all the non-procrastinators out there)
The annoyance entitled I swear I did some research! was somewhat bothersome for me because of its vague nature. I have taken to only citing after quotations, because it is hard to know where to drop in citations after summaries. I think that as long as the information isn't super specific, it is okay to write a summary style section without citing a specific source. It seems like a good rule of thumb might be, "if I had to look this information up, I should cite it." Perhaps our time in the library will help to make this a little more clear.
I thought that this was a very clever, approachable, useful article. I didn't know Oprah's boyfriend was capable of such writing.
Thoughtful response. As far as summary and paraphrase, always cite, and the way to know when is to cite at the end of any given section of summary and before you comment on the summary in your own words or present your own ideas either in relation to the summary or to transition to more summary. With summary, you may have a range of pages (101–19) since summary condenses; it's okay if the citation is covering a lot of pages.
ReplyDeleteIf the summary is of the entire, all you need is the name (if a complete work like a book) or a name and the full range of the article or book chapter.
Your response touched on everything. I enjoyed your closing sentence, it made me chuckle." I didn't know Oprah's boyfriend was capable of such writing."
ReplyDeletegood thoughts. I was always told if it wasn't your thoughts or your words cite it. but we shall find out lol
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